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Post  retupmoc Sat Jul 04, 2009 5:35 am

I woke up in the middle of the night. The wind was cold and and the place was foggy. I found myself walking unto nowhere. I was scared, scared of being lost. I stopped walking and looked around, I can't see anything but the thick fog. I knelt to the ground and wept. "Why? why? I didn't do anything wrong! I don't deserve this!" I sobbed. Suddenly, A bright light covered the place. I can't see, I got no choice but to close my eyes and wait for the place to be dim again. At last, the light stopped from shining. A beautiful lady came. Her hair was black and shiny. Her beauty is undeniable. I was staring at her, she's the most beautiful girl I ever saw, I envy her. "Are you sure?" she said doubtfully.
It all started last week, June 29th, Monday. It was a normal, sunny day. I woke up early in the morning for a fresh start. I prepared for the new school day.
I dressed up and prepared my things. I looked at my watch. OH MY GOD!! 6:45 am, the school service is not yet arriving. "Oh men!! I'm late, AGAIN!!" I muttered. I carried my big, heavy bag downstairs.
Beep!Beep! The school service was here already. I rushed to the door carrying my big bag. I opened the door and sat beside the driver.
As usual, we were late.

-to be continued... later..-


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Post  Admin Sat Jul 04, 2009 8:07 pm

what is the title? xd

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Post  mokomoko123 Sat Jul 04, 2009 9:59 pm

Admin wrote:what is the title? xd

still no title he said lol Wink

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Post  retupmoc Sat Jul 04, 2009 11:21 pm

mokomoko123 wrote:
Admin wrote:what is the title? xd

still no title he said lol Wink

yes still got no title... can't think of one...
btw, girl po ako Laughing
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Post  megumi Sun Jul 05, 2009 12:19 am

golden locket?

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Post  Admin Sun Jul 05, 2009 4:39 pm

ok... anyway nice plz. continue Smile

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Post  mokomoko123 Fri Jul 10, 2009 12:32 am

now it has a title

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